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Navy EVAL Bullet Examples
Opening Statements, Comments
The purpose and goal of the Eval is to accurately and fully describe performance. A laundry list of significant achievements does provide insight into a person's capabilities but it doesn't provide the whole picture. A list of achievements doesn't give any indication as to the character or personality of the person being evaluated. A Sailor might have a long list of impressive accomplishments but, at the same time, be a discipline problem and hard to work with. He or she might be an expert in their rating but the absolute worst at sharing knowledge or getting along with their peers or subordinates. And those social qualities are very important, at least as important as a person's technical skills! So, in addition to describing a person's professional and technical skills, we need to convey to the Eval's reader his social skills, his integrity, his character, his loyalty and other qualities which are not apparent when merely reading a list of accomplishments. The Opening statements or comments is where this facet of performance is described. This statement is very important. It's the first thing the reader sees and sets the tone for the whole Eval. Make sure it has the impact that can't be ignored.
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Petty Officer XXXXXX is a knowledgeable individiual with a positive attitude. XXX produces exceptional work and requires little supervision. He is dedicated to the XXX mission of providing quality XXXXXX and does so with a pleasant demeanor. XXX is a team player who contributes greatly to unit cohesiveness and morale. A diligent performer, AZ1 is a rising star who consistently displays the exceptional managerial and leadership skill of a Chief Petty Officer. Only onboard for a short time, Petty Officer Williams' impact on my command has been immediate and profound displaying strong leadership, technical knowledge, and personal diligence. Continuously engaged on the deckplate providing Sailors outstanding mentorship and superb leadership, ensuring all Sailors are optimally trained to carry out the Navy's mission. Petty Officer L is an exceptional leader who has the natural ability to gain maximim results through earning the trust and dedication of his Sailors. Superstar standout- Ranks 2 of 8 extremely talented First Class Petty Officers. My top two are indistinguishable. Performing now at levels fully competitive with the finest Chief Petty Officers! Absolute early select for AOC. CTT1 Johnson is an enthusiastic and highly motivated Sailor. Always willing to tackle the most demanding tasks completing them will in advance with utmost attention to detail. Exceptional, dedicated, and tireless Sailor who possesses boundless potential. In his short time onboard, Petty Officer XXXXX has displayed the utmost professionalism and commitment to mission accomplishment. He demonstrates extreme devotion to duty by seeking and obtaining the skills needed to excel as a Naval leader. Petty Officer Knight is an enthusiastic petty officer with a positive attitude and willingness to accept any assignment. Petty Officer Barker is a self-starter and inspirational leader. Strong moral fiber, respected by subordinates and superiors. A true professional in every sense of the word. Most emphatically ready for Chief Petty Officer selection! Dedicated, motivated LPO, responsible for 22 personnel, she supervised the management and services at the SARP treatment facility flawlessly. Highly motivated, indispensable member of the team, well knowledgeable on all aspects of the laboratory who is sought out by junior technicians on the different processing procedures of microbiology specimens A true professional. Produces accurate and timely results. His computer and network expertise was sought after daily by peers and Supervisors. SUPERB CHIEF PETTY OFFICER! Hands-down my number one Chief Petty Officer in the mess! Energetic, dedicated leader whose performance always exceeds my highest expectations. Excellent technical abilities; motivated and self-confident seaman; consistently performs high quality work A dynamic and highly motivated leader. Aggressively tackled the most demanding assignments, completing them with exceptional results. Outstanding leadership, managerial skills and an unusually high level of professional competence have contributed significantly to the unit's high state of readiness. Highly skilled member and motivated CPO; valuable asset to the unit and vital to Navy mission--PROMOTE! Petty Officer Parker's performance, both militarily and professionally, is nothing short of outstanding. Displays keen interest in work. Contributes full measure to any task, willingly accepts added responsibility. He has my strongest possible recommendation for advancement to Petty Officer Second Class. A task-oriented, conscientious SCPO--his efforts lead to increasing workcenter efficiency and effectiveness My nominee for promotion under the Combat Meritorious Advancement Program. Promote this warrior now! Top-notch technical abilities key to mission sucess, ready for increased supervisory responsibility. Promote! Absolutely TOP NOTCH sailor, XXXXXXX is a leader in whom I place extraordinary trust! |
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MY #2 OF 45 FIRST CLASS PETTY OFFICERS! A HIGHLY MOTIVATED, MISSION-ORIENTED LEADER PERFORMING AT THE CHIEF PETTY OFFICER LEVEL! Petty Officer xxx possesses an enthusiastic urge and ability to achieve. He/she is an intelligent, unique leader constantly thriving on new challenges while transferring goals and objectives into concrete, workable plans. Enthusiastic and dedicated, actively seeks out challenges and doggedly pursues them until resolved. He is singled out for jobs that require determination and skill and has improved or corrected many chronic problem areas. He is a shining example to his peers and subordinates. As Chief of the Boat, he has been a superior leader whose innate ability to motivate, inspire and train personnel significantly improved productivity and command performance. OUTSTANDING CPO who is scorching the competition. A true leader. Developed a cohesive Chief's Mess that focuses on the command's success. PROMOTE TO SCPO NOW! Ranked #1 of 5 in Admin department and #4 of 10 assigned. An absolute must select for Chief Petty Officer. My best CIC Watch Supervisor! Developed and maintained an efficient and motivated watch characterized by professionalism and pride. PROMOTE TO CHIEF NOW! A leader with an indefatigable work ethic. Hand picked to be the only E-7 to attain the title of Senior Watch Officer which is usually held by an E-8. He makes the process of managing the Ops Center look easy. Dependable, motivated, and trustworthy--a SCPO with the courage to manage without visible support Highly reliable, indispensable member of our team; well trained and knowledgeable on all spectrums of satellite equipment Ranked # 1 of 6 highly competitive CPOs. Chief Rolex is the most productive and versatile Chief at this Command. He has my complete confidence and is relied upon heavily for all vital network defense decisions for the USCENTCOM AOR. A welcome new addition to the Power Generation workcenter, a seaman with potential. PO1 Dooney is a highly qualified PO; directly responsible for uptime rate of over 99% on all strategic communications links; exceeded stringent DISA standards P.O. Smith is an exceptional Front Desk clerk whose performance of his assigned duties exceeds all requirements. Intelligent and conscientious, he requires neither supervision nor guidance in order to attain superior results. P.O. Smith's long term commitment to the improvement of his duties led him to be one of the top Front Desk clerks at the Combined Bachelors Quarters, Naval Station Pearl Harbor. Highly motivated! Energetic and diligent--demonstrated strong ability to identify, analyze and solve problems |
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